Jacaerys sees snow for the first time when he goes to Winterfell. Not only that, but he also experiences his first fall of snow. Imagine Cregan telling him they should get inside, but Jace just stops and stares at the sky in awe. He let’s the flakes fall on his hair and face, while he raises his hands to catch some. Looks at Cregan with the biggest smile and his eyes gleaming: “It’s snowing!”, then goes back to admiring the sky. And Cregan just feels his heart hammering in his ribcage and a warmth growing inside of him. He approaches the Targaryen prince and softly remove some of the snow from Jace’s hair and smiles tenderly at him.“Aye, it is snowing.”
if you ever feel bad about your writing, especially structure-wise, remember: you’re still not the one who put “somehow, palpatine has returned” into a multimillion dollar franchise produced by one of the greediest and richest corporations on earth. you’ll always be better than that one.
